Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?

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In recent days, it has been an increasing concern that the percentage of prisoners who commit crimes after setting free rises at alarming rates. There are various reasons why

this

problem has occurred and there are some solutions proposed to solve

this

issue. There are two main causes of the rapidly increasing rate of repeat offenders.

First

and foremost, one of the main reasons is social consciousness. From an ethical perspective, most communities judge criminals like ‘once a criminal, always a criminal’ whether they are kind-hearted or not.

For example

people

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People

whose profile

has

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have

a signal of crime may be refused by companies when they apply to get a new job.

As a result

, because of

poor living condition

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the poor living condition

, they have to stole, even kill other people to exist in

this

society.

Second

, in

term

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terms

of psychological effect, other dangerous criminals can have a negative influence on other offenders. Specifically, after setting free, juvenile crime tend to feel difficult to resist temptation from other criminal’s enticement.

However

, there are some solutions recommended for tackling

this

problem.

First

rasing

increasing in quantity or value

raising

racing

ex-offenders’ awareness of how important to make a new life and how serious the strictest punishment of becoming criminals again is one of a helpful solution.

Second

, providing education or training to help them prepare to get a new job.

Last

but not least, society should respect criminals. Organizations should let them get a job to improve their living

stand

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standards

, as a typical example.

Additionally

, there is no discrimination between ordinary people and ex-offenders. In conclusion,

although

a number of repeat offenders increase, there

are

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some solution could tackle

this

problem.

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