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The internet has changed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems the did not exist before. What are the problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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After the creation of the Internet, it got much
more easier
Suggestion
easier
 to use and share data. In the same way, it dramatically
rised
located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
 the crimes, like stealing secret or private
information
 globally. Teaching people to keep their private
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
duties
details
 safely and developing safety of
information
 on the Internet could be
right approach
Suggestion
the right approach
 to the
problem
. As a new type of crime,
cyberattack
Suggestion
cyber attack
 is growing in tandem with the rise of the Internet users. Since all the people and government are storing their data on their desktop and other smart devices, that connected to
the the
definite article
the
 Internet, making it easy
to
Suggestion
for
 hackers to steal one's private data illegally through the Internet. What we call data is: online bank accounts; top secret documents; etc. No one can ensure that these
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
dates
details
 are 100% safe. To solve the
problem
, best approach can be
increasing
Suggestion
increased
 safety rate of data by adding the curriculum of high schools, colleges, and other academic institutions 'safety of
information
' as main subject. Because most of us do not have ample knowledge about our smart devices' weaknesses that let to steal our
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
. In modern life merely teaching students how to use
information
 technologies seems to be not enough. In conclusion, lack of knowledge about using
information
 technologies and the Internet safely may cause great problems like having your money or secret documents stolen. To tackle
this
problem
 we can educate people how to keep their data safe, to prevent the
problem
 from
rising
come into existence; take on form or shape
arising
.

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