You have just been offered a place on a short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Greet your friend and tell your friend the good news 2. Ask your friend about life in the seaside town 3. Arrange a time to meet your friend before you start the course

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Hi Tim, I have some exciting news, I have been granted an opportunity to participate

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a short training course in Adelaide by April of

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year. I'

thrilled to see you and experience living in your lovely place. What excites

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most, apart from meeting you, are the many wonderful adventures I have yet to try while I'

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to Glenelg Beach after training and on weekends, I would like to travel a bit

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away and explore Mount Lofty. Are there any other destinations you might be able to recommend? How about food? Where do you usually go for dinner? I like Vietnamese and Thai food, do you have any good restaurants that I might be able to try? I'

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with you shortly upon my arrival. When do you suggest we catch up? It's been ages since we were able to hang out over a cup of coffee so we definitely have to make up for

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time. Let me know so we can arrange the time and date for our meeting. Kind regards, Cecilia

Sat Feb 08 2020

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