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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Five Major Types of Fast Food Eaten in Melbourne (units) 2005 Present 2025 Hamburgers 40 38 51 Fried Chicken 35 37 45 Salads 5 15 41 Fried Rice 6 9 9 Noodles 6 8 9

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The table
illustrate
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illustrates
 the amounts consummation of different type of fast food in Melbourne in the years 2005, 2020 and 2025. Overall,
hamburger
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the hamburger
 was the most fast food consumed in
beginning period
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the beginning period
, while the salad was the least, in the end of the period
hamburger
 is steady the heights
rate
, whereas the fried rice and noodles were lowest
rate
. In 2005, it’s clear that
hamburger
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the hamburger
 is the significant
rate
 about 40%, fried chicken is
secondly
 with 35%,
however
 6% is for both type fried rice and noodles, while
salad
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the salad
 was the lowest
rate
 about 5%.
In
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At
 present,
hamburger
 consumed about 38% and
this
percentage
 upward trend about 12%,
however
 fried chicken is
rise
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rising
 about 2% in 2020 with
percentage
 37% and reach 45% in 2025, salad type increase dramatically with
percentage
 15%
in
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at
 present and
percentage
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the percentage
 became higher in 2025 with 41%. Fried rice in 2020 and 2025 had
same
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the same rate
rate
 with 9%, in other hand noodles had 8% in 2020 and increase
rate
 about 1% in 2025.
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