The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
amount
of nutrients, Change the quantifier
number
such
, as sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
which people in the USA eat in four meals per day, which are breakfast
, lunch
, dinner
and snacks
. If you eat them too much, the body will be unhealthy.
The percentages of sodium
and saturated fat in dinner
are highest, with 43% sodium
and 37% of
saturated fat consumed. The major source of added Change preposition
apply
sugar
in a typical American diet is snacks
which provide 42% of added sugar
. Dinner
also
associates with 23% of added sugar
, which is second
largest among all four meals. By Correct article usage
the second
the
contrast, Correct article usage
apply
lunch
has 29% consumption of sodium
and 26% consumption of added sugar
.
American breakfast
is much healthier than dinner
and snacks
as it provides the lowest percentage of the 3 types of nutrients, with just around 16% of each. Although
lunch
is less healthy than breakfast
, it is still healthier than snacks
and dinner
because it contributes to 29% of sodium
, 26% of saturated fat and only 19% of added sugar
.
To conclude
, breakfast
and lunch
in the USA are healthier than dinner
and snacks
, with dinner
being the most unhealthy meal whereas
breakfast
is the healthiest meal.Submitted by saugatbhattarai2053 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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