Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views in terms of getting material. Some people argue that the most effective way in order to obtain data is through social media.
However
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,
i
would argue that it's Change the capitalization
I
not
longer the best way to get news.
On the one hand, there are many indisputable grounds for arguing that Correct your spelling
no
newspapers
are still the most popular among individuals even though we are living in the
globalized world. Correct article usage
a
Initially
, when the internet began to exist, newspapers
were favourable by
individuals Change preposition
to
in particular
, most senior citizens have developed a habit of reading a magazine on a daily basis and they don't want to change their habits. Secondly
, newspapers
are considered more
trustworthy source of data when compared to Add an article
a more
other report
. To take a specific example, most Change the wording
another report
other reports
newspapers
are usually written by professional journalists and attentively checked, edited and even censored by local inhabitants.
On the other hand
, the
social media has become more prevalent and dominant Correct article usage
apply
due to
opportunities and convenience. Firstly
, readers can access info easily when compared to the old method. Major
reason would be all readers have their own devices Add an article
The major
such
as smartphone
, cell phones and so forth can obtain a huge article in a few clicks. Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
Furthermore
, online reading enables readers a great experience, thanks to the constant advancement in technology, which it's
possible to upload movies and audio recordings. To take an example, fans of football can watch or download any Verb problem
it
games
whenever they want via the internet.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
game
besides
being quite
reliable source of news and attracting Change the article
quite a
a quite
to
senior citizens, Change preposition
apply
newspapers
have lost their reputation due to
the internet, which has more choices and more
accessible than outdated Add a missing verb
is more
one
.Fix the agreement mistake
ones
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