Write a letter to your landlord to ask about repair work that was not completed successfully. Write What the problem was What the repairs did What you expect
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Jaspreet Kaur and I am one of your tenants, who lives at 23 124 Street, Surrey BC. I am writing to complain about the heating issue that we have
in
our building for a long Add a missing verb
had in
time
, even the repair guy who came last
time
,
did not do anything.
As you know I am living here Remove the comma
apply
since
Change preposition
for
last
two years and always pay my rent on Correct article usage
the last
time
. However
, we are facing some problems with the heating system. Firstly
, the furnace which provides the heat to our floor is currently not working. Moreover
, sometimes it produces weird noise which disturbs us from concentrating on studies
. Correct pronoun usage
our studies
Thus
, it is getting difficult for us to survive in this
kind of environment.
Last
time
the repair guy, who came in to fix the problem of heat, found that the furnace needs to be replaced because it’s too old. He was assuring us that he will be back by the end of this
week to install a new furnace. However
, it’s been two weeks and we did not hear anything back from him.
I assume this
matter requires your urgent attention. Therefore
, I want you to take necessary
actions to fix the heating system. Correct article usage
the necessary
Otherwise
, we would have to think about moving to a different apartment. I hope you can understand our situation and get this
matter resolved as soon as possible.
I look forward hearing
from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jaspreet KaurChange preposition
to hearing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite