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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

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Nowadays, one of the most pressing issues is the increasing number of
phone
 usage. In
this
 circumstance, it frequently appears that the majority of
people
 think about using smartphones are convenient communication tools, while a certain number of
people
 suppose that using smartphones will lead to adverse ramifications
such
 as health issues.
This
 situation has had a negative effect in order to cope with
this
 problem. I totally agree with the idea that
this
 has occurred drawbacks more than benefits. There are numerous merits to
this
 topic along with certain demerits as " very rose come with thorns"; the following paragraphs will analyze the pros and cons of using mobile phones. On the one hand,
this
 phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to
people
.
However
, especially using smartphones have provided convenient communication during the pandemic, but
phone
 users are already used to utilizing regardless of the Covid-19 issues.
For example
, I have been living for almost three years far away from my family in a foreign country. After moving to the USA, I am able to only get a relationship with my family by calling or texting.
This
 is a good opportunity for immigrant
people
.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe that
phone
 usage is addictive in the past decade, a lot of
people
 suffer because they use the
phone
 unusual concept.
For instance
, many
people
 who use the
phone
 before going to sleep at night have sleep problems and
this
 negatively affects the life and health of many
people
 during the day at work or in classes. To sum up, " every coin comes two sides" in the same way
this
 topic has both benefits and drawbacks. I recapitulate my opinion by saying that using a smartphone is a
negatively
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 effect on human lives.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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