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Caring for the children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#children #society #mothers #fathers #childcare #courses
In
contemporary
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 world,
childcare
 is more important than other works of
parents
. A cluster of like-minded people
voice
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 that training courses of
childcare
 are
neccessry
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necessary
 for today's
parents
 due to lack of
knowledge
.
However
,
i
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 could not less agree on it owing to some reasons that would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. There are most of
reasons
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the reasons
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 why
childcare
 is really crucial for mom and dad. The
first
 and foremost reason is that
parents
 are
more busy
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 because of work and busy
sacdule
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schedule
thats
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that's
 why they do not have more time for
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children
childrens
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children
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.
Moreover
, if they want to good health to
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children
childrens
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children
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 so they have to start
childcare
 courses .
As a result
,
childcare
knowledge
 is more important for new mothers and fathers .
childcare
centers
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centres
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 teach
parents
 some easy
way
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ways
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 to
recogonize
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recognize
 about the feelings of budding minds.
secondly
, there
is
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are
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 high reasons
of
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for
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 illiteracy among mothers and fathers.
Beacause
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Because
 they do know about how to feel about the babies feelings what they need .
Furthermore
, if they learn about
childcare
 they can give
good
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 future to their babies. Learning
centers
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centres
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 will teach to
themxome
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them some
exercise
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exercises
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 about babies what kind of food
good
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is good
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 for their health . If
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children
childrens
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children
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 eat
healthly
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healthy
 food they can
servive
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service
survive
 any hazards.
For example
, old
parents
 know what kind of food they need and crucial for them but nowadays
parents
 need more
knowledge
 about
childcare
 as well as they can learn about the traditions of our roots. To conclude,
childcare
 classes is
boon
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a boon
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 for
parents
beacuse
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because
 it is really good for them they can enhance their
knowledge
 about
childfrens
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children's
children
. I
am firmly agree
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firmly agree
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 with
this
 statement
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