You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what the airline should do about it.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention to the

food

that was served to us during the flight. I am Isha Sharawat, took a flight from Delhi to Tokyo on 20 September 2021. My flight number was FI7890 and my seat number was A47. I would like to mention the problem I have faced,

Firstly

, the service was very poor. I had ordered the vegetarian

food

and requested the attendant to serve me a little fast as yesterday was my fast and I left today morning early to reach the airport on time without having breakfast. But the attendant served me the

food

after one hour and it was the wrong order as she brought non-vegetarian dishes. After that, she again took an hour to serve me a meal and the quality of the meal was pathetic. It was cold and stale and tasted bitter as if it was very old. I did not eat the

food

during the trip. Because of ,that I felt nausea.

Therefore

, I request you to check the whole matter with the crew staff and I want the airline to refund me the amount of money deducted for the meals as compensation.

Also

, the airline should check the

food

before serving it to the people. Hoping to see your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Isha

Submitted by ishasharawat2 on Mon Oct 11 2021

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coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is well organized, but improvements can be made in connecting ideas within and between paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, but can be improved by using more formal language and addressing the recipient by name if possible.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph addresses a single idea, but better paragraph transitions can be employed to enhance coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

The letter provides a complete response to the task, but could benefit from a more formal and professional tone.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

223 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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