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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#populations #cities #people #homes #space #development
There is no doubt these days we see the huge growth of residents in different countries,
moreover
, we see them living in tiny
homes
space
 which has small outdoor
space
 or even no
space
. In
this
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i
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 will
disscuse
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discuss
 the
benifits
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benefits
 and the backwards of
this
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statement
. At some point certain of people when they decide to
built
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 a house or even rent one they always looking for one with an outdoor
space
 so they can do their
activites
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activities
.
For example
, a
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playground
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play ground
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playground
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 for the
familis
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families
 with children, there is a number of parents can not go outside with their kids to a park or somewhere else.
Moreover
, having an
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out door
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outdoor
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area
it
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would be fun when you gathering with family and friends. An example, doing
barbque
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barbeque
 on weekends.
However
, it is not always a good idea to have an opening
area
.
On the other hand
, nowadays buying or renting houses cost
alot
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a lot
 of money, to be more
clarfiy
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clarify
clearly
 even a small apartment could be as expensive as
homes
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. Many
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people
tunrn
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turn
 to a residence no outdoor
area
 to save money,
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,
homes
 without opening areas
it
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really can help for saving
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 energy,
for example
, there is no need to clean up the backyard or the garden after
a
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stormy and windy weather,
furthermore
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 it may destroy the whole
area
 decoration. It is dangerous for the kids under age five years they may
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 out by them selfs and got lost. In conclusion, it seems there is a sperate
views
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 of getting an opening
area
,
however
, doing
a
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research for
homes
 and apartment it may help for the right
desicon
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decision
, something works with the money they have and the family
sitoution
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situation
.
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