You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.

Dear
Mr.
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Briggs, On behalf of the president of Greenwich,
school
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council. I
wish
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invite you as a guest speaker at
one-day
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conference on Thursday 27 March to give a talk to the students. Greenwich Secondary
School
has an event every year for
different
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subject
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. We would appreciate it if you come to talk about social media. We would like your talk
to begin
at 10:00 am for about 40 minutes, allow another 15 to 20 minutes for questions, and answer session. A projector screen is available and we can give you any audio and sound engineer that you may wish to play during the talk. After the
talk
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there will be complimentary a walk around the
school
and sights in the city and after that a lunch in the restaurant
near by
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school
. We are willing to cover your transport to and from the
school
. We cannot pay
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you
about
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lecture
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because
this
is a non-profit event but we would pay
about
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transport, food and accommodation in an apartment. Please respond at your earliest convenience. If you have
a
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further
questions please contact me by phone
on
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561-235-7849 or by email at [email protected]. Yours sincerely, Viktoria Yordanova
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Community center
  • Office event
  • Organize
  • Facilities
  • Availability
  • Reserve
  • Date
  • Time
  • Duration
  • Number of participants
  • Budget
  • Catering
  • Equipment
  • Setup
  • Decorations
  • Entertainment
  • Parking
  • Assistance
  • Collaboration
  • Appreciate
  • Gratitude
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