In some countries, changes in the amount of rainfall have led to a serious shortage of water and governments are now under pressure to find solutions that address this problem. What are some of the problems that lack of water causes and what can be done to save water in the future?
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Changing
in the environment directly affecting rainfall might be Replace the word
Changes
due to
global warming, which further
leads to the shortage of water
and the authorities are under a burden to solve this
major problem. There are some countable issues, which are caused by deficiency of water
. The measures to conserve water
should become
into force. Let's delve deeper into the following paragraphs.
Verb problem
come
To begin
with, if we talk about its'
troubles, there are certainly major problems which we will have to suffer a lot. As we know human Change noun form
its
body
contains 70% of
Change preposition
apply
water
, the majority of parts of a persons'
Change noun form
person's
body
like body
fluids, for instance
, WBCs, RBCs, and
capillaries etcetera carry Correct word choice
apply
water
in every corner of the body
and perform their functions. In all these vessels major part of the water
is carried out in the form of blood. Furthermore
, a large part of agriculture depends upon water
, like irrigation, which is essential particularly
for cornfields Add the comma(s)
, particularly
as well as
wheat instead
of other crops. it is a truth
that the whole world not only Correct word choice
true
consuming
food in the form of these major grains but Wrong verb form
consumes
also
earning
a lot of money.
Let's move on to its solutions, Wrong verb form
earns
no
doubt Correct pronoun usage
I
drink
has become a necessity for every individual, but we can Wrong verb form
drinking
do
some efforts to save it. Rainwater storage is one of the best solutions. Verb problem
make
As in some
countries, Change preposition
Some
for example
, China, participating
in Wrong verb form
participate
storage
of rainwater. They are filtering it and consuming it as drinking Correct article usage
the storage
water
, therefore
these ways should be implemented everywhere. Furthermore
, as most of the community is just careless when they fill their water
tank and forget to switch off
, it is most commonly seen in the Indian villages where Correct pronoun usage
it off
water
is freely flowing and there is no proper drainage system which further
leads to stagnation of water
and people becoming sick due to
more gathering of mosquitos and flees. The government should strictly impose some laws against such
kinds of neglections
In conclusion, although
we know life is nothing without a drink, so why we are so unaware.
Everybody should be aware and should do their full participation in saving the drink. The administration should take action against the Change the punctuation
?
misusage
of drinks and should conduct seminars in every village.Correct your spelling
misuse
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The essay touches on the problems caused by water shortage and suggests some solutions, but the ideas are not well-developed or fully supported. The examples provided do not effectively illustrate the points made, and the response lacks clarity and depth.