For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter:

#year #member #club #membership #secretary

Dear

Mr.

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Joe, My name is Elyn and I

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have been

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member

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a member

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of the Royal

Club

since 2015, my member ID is 1122. I am writing

this

letter to inform you regarding the termination of my membership

from

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Club

Royal in London,

due to

personal reasons. As

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mentioned, I was a regular member of

this

community for

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quite a

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quiet

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apply

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long time but past

one

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apply

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year

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was busy with my work and could not make it to the

club

. I hold a premium membership card which

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was purchased at the time of joining.

Initial

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payment of $300 was

done

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made

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cash and later every month $150 was debited from my account. If you want I can submit the receipts and bank transactions history.

Apart from

this

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would like to express my sincere thanks to

club's

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the club's

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fitness centre and the coach. I have benefited a lot from doing daily exercises and the fitness equipment is really useful and premium quality. The weight loss program conducted at

club

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the club

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was successful for me and

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loss

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almost 10 kgs all thanks to the fitness team.

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, I gained

freiends

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friends

from

this

community and we are still in touch. It is really

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disheartening

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disheartened

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to discontinue from

this

estemeed

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esteemed

club

however

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need to relocate to my new hometown

stanford

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which is about 100

kms

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far

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from

this

place. I hope the Royal

club

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will soon open its new venture in my new hometown. If you need any additional information please feel free to contact me. Looking

formward

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forward

to hearing from you. Regards, Elyn

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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1Word repetition
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1 paragraphs

260 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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