Today, many people do not have time to spend with their families in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, most people in

this

modern world have less talk and

time

with their family

members

.

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is happened

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due to

the busy life of individuals which

caused

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by

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problems they tackle

with

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.

This

essay cites a few causes and provides some solutions to alleviate

this

issue. The main reason for

this

problem that many

parents

have less communication and

time

for their

children

is their busy lives. These days, adults should work hard in order to provide

well-fare

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welfare

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for their families.

For example

,

a

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in a

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nuclear family, both father and mother might have a nine-to-five job in order to gain high revenue. On the one hand, there are always traffic jams in metropolitans, particularly in rush hours. So,

parents

are stuck on roads and spend

almost

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most

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of their entire day for commuting.

As a result

, they have no

time

to communicate and do

activity

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activities

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with their

children

on weekdays, and at the weekend they want to spend their

time

to rest

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more than

do

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any activity with their kids at home or outside.

However

, there are some solutions to make free hours to talk and play with their

children

.

Firstly

, using modern technology

is

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might be the better way to spend more

time

remotely among

family’s

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family

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members

.

Parents

could manage some

their

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of their

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free

time

during work

time

to call and talk with their families.

For instance

, they could spend their lunch

time

calling

to

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their kids in order to keep in touch with family and update their lives to each other.

In addition

,

instead

of spending all day

in

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at

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weekend

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the weekend

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to rest

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resting

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,

parents

should take their kids outside

for doing

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to do

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some activities together and strike up

family’s

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family

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relationship

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relationships

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such

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as picnic

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picnic

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. In

this

way,

children

and their

parents

could spend

their

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apply

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quality

time

with each other. In conclusion,

economic

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situation and bustling lives

are

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have

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caused families to have less

time

to spend with

members

. But there are some suggested ways to rectify it,

such

as using modern technology to talk with family

members

or spending

time

with

children

in

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at

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weekend

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weekends

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more than resting to strike up family

relationship

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relationships

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.