Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, teaching students to be competing at
school
is debatable. Many people argue that children
must be taught to be working competitively at school
while others think that being cooperative and having good teamwork is more valuable. This
essay will discuss both ideas and state my personal opinion regarding the views.
On the one hand, many believe that children
at school
are required to be educated as competitive students. Educating students to be competitive at school
may increase their individual performance to survive their social life
in the future. For example
, I have a brother who has been spoiled by my parents and as a result
, he is not capable of deciding anything in his life
without my parents. Therefore
, it is crucial to train children
to be independent and competitive from a young age.
On the other hand
, others think that teamwork skills and working together as a team are more beneficial for the children
to survive. Training children
to be able to work as a team may help them to overcome difficulties in social life
in the future. For instance
, when one of my friends was having depression, he did not know how to ask for help. Thus
, learning how to be sociable and having good teamwork, will help children
to overcome one of these issues.
In conclusion, although
some individuals believe that working competitively may sound like a safer option for survival, others are convinced that being cooperative will also
help children
to live better. In my personal opinion, I believe that having both skills will give the best outcome for children
to survive their future life
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