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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

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It is true that some
people
 consider sharing as much data as possible in fields of science, business and academy is beneficial while others think the
information
 is too important to be shared freely. In
this
 essay, I will explain both standpoints. In my opinion, sharing
information
 in fields of science, business and academy are totally beneficial.
Firstly
,
people
 may benefit society by sharing data in scientific research especially when it comes to a new discovery.
Secondly
, companies may benefit the world since they can use the
information
 to produce better products.
For example
, companies like Apple and Tesla, make better devices and make
people
's life more convenient.
Finally
, with
such
information
 shared in the academic field, they may provide better education and better education leads to a better future.
Nonetheless
, some
information
 is too valuable to be shared and shouldn’t be free especially for that takes years to gather. The main reason is some
people
 spend years collecting data and the cost is significant. I think no one would like to share
this
 valuable
information
 for free. Another reason is
people
 will not know the purpose of sharing
information
.
For example
,
people
 can’t imagine if the
information
 is shared freely with the terrorists and they make use of it to threaten the world.
Lastly
, there is still some classified
information
 that shouldn’t be shared with the public. In conclusion, it is beneficial with the statement to share as much
information
 as possible in certain fields. We should
also
 consider some
information
 is too valuable and crucial to be shared freely.
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