Some countries pay extremely high salaries to people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree?
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government should Change the verb form
standing
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impose
limit
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limits
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on
higher
paid Add an article
a higher
job
. I completely disagree with the stance and would enunciate vivid reasons for the same in the discourse ahead followed by my opinion. Higher post designation leads to higher pay.
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jobs
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, high pay to the higher position employees actually
beneficial. In recent years, pay Add a missing verb
is actually
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the difference
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differences
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increased
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has
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in Fix the agreement mistake
differences
job
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a race between employees. Eventually, employees do their best to get Change the verb form
creates
promotion
and higher pay. Fix the agreement mistake
promotions
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, worker
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workers
focus
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companies
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companies'
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get
one level up. Change the verb form
gets
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performance
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an outstanding
the outstanding
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, higher executives and CEO’S
have higher responsibility in the Change noun form
CEO
company
or organization. Also
, individuals who get higher postthey
responsible for any action in the Correct your spelling
post they
company
. All the upper level
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making
companies
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it definitely affect
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affects
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the overall
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company's
companies
profits. For instance
, one of
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apply
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the well-knows
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Indian Correct your spelling
well-known
company
is CCD. After many years of financial struggle Fix the agreement mistake
companies
company
’s director decided that
to change the core members of the Correct word choice
apply
company
. Eventually, CCD became second
largest coffee making Correct article usage
the second
company
in india
. All in Change the capitalization
India
all
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are
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apply
feel
motivated towards Change the form of the verb
feeling
company
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the company
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then
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apply
company’s
become more productive.
In conclusion, high pay to higher executives is actually beneficial. Change noun form
company
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, their responsibility and action leads
to Change the verb form
lead
major
impact on any Correct article usage
a major
company
or organization. Pay
difference between Add an article
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job
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