you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear friend Bahaa, I wanted to tell you how fascinating the

last

week

when

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we were together in your place, and I had arrived home by midnight the day I left. Thanks for inviting me for

this

memorable holiday, I was so glad to

finally

see you after a long time.the best day was when we went to the sea

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because I was able to achieve my dream by driving the jet ski. Sadly, I

had

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left my wallet in your house before I leave. It has important stuff

such

as driving licences as well as money, I can't leave my house now until I get it back. As soon as you find it, please send it by

ober

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over

. I hope you can find and send it as soon as possible. Regards, Ahmed

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

133 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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