you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Sarah, I write you to say thank you so much for arranging a wonderful holiday week. It was

such

a great memory for me! I couldn't imagine how my holiday would be without you. Your house is really great and fantastic.

Moreover

, your food is incredibly delicious! But I'm having a problem right now. I have been trying to find my wallet in all of my bags but I couldn't find it so I think I forgot my wallet in your house and it's probably on the table in the living room. I was in a hectic situation when I lelf the house so I didn't check my stuff before I go. That's my mistake. I want you to help send it back to me and I will definitely cover all the costs. Would you mind packing my wallet in an envelope and deliver to the post office? I have seen a post office nearby your place and it's around 5 minutes by walking from your back door. I'll be very appreciative if you can do it. Warm Wishes, Rawisara

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you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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