Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ● Thank them for the holiday and the photos. ● Explain why you didn’t write earlier. ● Invite them to come and stay with you.

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Dear Kamala, Hope you and your family are doing good. The purpose of writing

this

letter is to thank you for the wonderful experience that we all had at your place and to acknowledge that I had received all the photographs of those nostalgic moments. After returning to my hometown, I got busy with daily routine work at home and pending work items at the workplace due to which I was not able to connect with you. Starting my every day during

this

trip by viewing the garden full of beautiful flowers in front of your home was adorable. I believe none of us can forget the quality time that our families spent together. I request you to plan a trip to my city

month on the occasion of the festival Diwali so that our families can have a get-together. Hope to meet you soon. Warm Regards, Simrandeep Kaur

Submitted by simrandeep0501 on Tue May 24 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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