IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 2

In the future, it seems it would be more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent researching on other planet to live such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#future #earth #people #money #planet
Dear Madam, Let me inform you about the issue in the room I am living
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
 and I would like to ask you to help me in solving the issue described below. I share the room with my
neighbor
Change the spelling
neighbour
show examples
,
student
Correct article usage
a student
show examples
 from the 2
course
Change to a plural noun
courses
show examples
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
Math, Jane Howkins. She is occupied by part-time work in free from education time. She is an operator in a call
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
 and she has a number of calls during
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
working hours. Unfortunately, the time she works
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
is the time when everybody prepares for lessons,
either
Correct determiner usage
apply
show examples
including me. There is
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
only one room we can work at, so I have to study in pretty difficult conditions – she always speaks, so I can’t focus and do my homework. I would really appreciate
if
Correct pronoun usage
it if
show examples
 you could provide us with 2-bedroom accommodation to make it possible to work separately and not to interfere with each other.
Submitted by alekseybeletsky on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: