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Nowadays more and more people consume fast food on a regular basis. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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It is noticeable in recent years most people tend to eat fast
food
 outside their homes
instead
 of home-made
food
, I believe,
this
 is a bad habit and negative development for many reasons
such
 as health, and cost issues,
this
 essay shall throw some light on these reasons. Ready-to-eat
food
 has become a type of culture that we practice in our lives among the different ages of a majority of people, we cannot deny the delicious taste of fast
food
, but
also
 we should be moderate in consuming
this
 type of
food
 to save our money; because buying fast
food
 is more expensive than home-made
food
,
in other words
, readymade
food
 is gaining popularity among the vast amount of people because of the saving specious time which consumed in prepare home-made
food
.
In addition
, ready-to-eat
food
 has low nutrition values, harmful freeze ingredients, and preservatives which means the readymade
food
 includes a lot of carcinogenic properties, unhealthy fats, and harmful oil,
consequently
, medics around the world recommend avoiding eating all types of fast
food
 as much as we can, because of health consequences
such
 as diabetes, and obesity,
furthermore
,
this
 kind of
food
 causes the addictive which means if you try once you cannot stop trying it more and more. In conclusion, despite, readymade
food
 has become one of the most popular cultures, in my opinion, eating junk
food
 is still considered negative development since it causes various health problems, and wastes our money, maybe we can try fast
food
 once in a while, but the high consumption should be avoided at all costs.
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