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In order to reduce crime,we need ti attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. Itbis not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. Do you agree or disagree?

#crime #ti #attack #poverty #lack #opportunities #itbis #police #street #people #prison
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many
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culprits
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 have been punished in a proper way,
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number of
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crime rates prove that legal authorities have been missing something valuable
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crime
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 mitigation process.Some
people
 hold the opinion that main social issues
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 poor educational background and poverty should be solved in order
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yo
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 suppress all kinds of illegal activities. I agree that
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if both the government and
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society should come forward to support poor
people
.
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, it is impossible
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in many countries to provide
right
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education
 as they face population growth at a considerable rate.In some other places,
education
 mainly focuses on job purposes rather than emphasizing
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social values.
As a result
, knowingly or unknowingly
people
 act as unthoughtful and end up in prison.To illustrate, In India,the number of rape cases
have
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 been increasing day by day because of
lack
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 of proper sex
education
.
In addition
,
people
 find loopholes and
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 fearless without thinking
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 negative consequences that they have done in
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society.
Secondly
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luxury
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 lifestyle is a dream for every person
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in spite
inspire
inspite
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in spite
 of caste,colour ,gender and age.
However
, poverty caused by the reduced number of job opportunities
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 life more miserable and starving to death. In order to prevent
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starvation
people
 start to engage in several kinds of illegal activities
such
 as smuggling, theft and resale of stolen goods, extortion and so on.To illustrate, Tourists are less interested to visit African countries as
this
 place is well known for robbery caused by poverty. To conclude, I plausibly agree with the fact that the government should promote action plans that could enhance
people
's quality of life. I suggest that the government should create more job opportunities and make the
people
 aware
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 the importance of
education
.
Therefore
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 the crime rates would be decreasing significantly.
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