The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, the
government
are spending so much money
on research. Some people
think the government
is wasting money
and should spend money
finding the problems
of the public. I completely agree with that point which is the government
are wasting money
and these reasons will be discussed in the below paragraph.
To begin
with, the government
is spending money
on useless activities
like giving money
to the people
without any hard work,
and spending Remove the comma
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money
on their own party activities
etc. For example
, take my village, they are many people
doing farming. If we provide subsidies to the farmers, it will be useful to do well farming but the government
is not interested support
to farmers. So, the Add the particle
to support
government
should enquire about the people
's problems
, like what type of problems
really facing, then
the government
should spend money
for the public.
In addition
, the government
failed many times support to the public. For instance
, recently one situation
happened in my district that was flooded. In that flood situation
, so many people
lost homes and some people
suffered without food but the government
did not support anything people
in that situation
. At the same time, governments are spending money
on party activities
, these are some reasons that show the government
wasting money
. If the government
spend money
on the people
in the flood situation
,that is
useful to overcome the situation
.
In conclusion, I believe the government
is wasting money
to spend other unnecessary activities
. So, the government
should understand the public problems
, and then
spend money
to solve the problems
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