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Recent advances in medicine have resulted in an increase in life expectancy over the past four years. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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For the
last
 four ,years medicine devices have been improved as well as treatment significantly stepped forward. Few people will dispute the pros.
However
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 I will outline possible pros and cons and explain why I feel that there are far more advantages. Those who oppose long
life
 living tend to have two misguided assumptions.
First
 of all, they believe we would not have enough natural resources if the population
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 a critical grade. Another fear is that vacant job opportunity is not endless. Indeed, it was reported that fossil resources are almost exhausted and the world suffers from unemployment. That findings,
however
, have since been discredited. When it comes to long living it is definitely a case for elderly wealth people. Clearly, the majority of
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 has invested their spare time
firstly
 for education and lately
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 earn money. Thereby, they can enjoy
life
 only in
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 years.
Moreover
, considered that the older the wiser
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individual
invividual
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individuals
. It is not a secret that
personal
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 piece of advice from
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 experienced man is
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highly
higly
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 valuable. In conclusion,
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 some argue about
life
 expectancy
agains
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against
gains
again
 increasing
life
 expectancy. In my point of ,view long
life
 duration has
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 better effect in terms of personal happiness and knowledge sharing.
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