You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Say which part-time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

Dear Sir or Madam, I writing
this
to request
from
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you cancel my registration for a part-time
program
that I booked several weeks ago.
First,
let me provide you with the
program
details that made the registration. I got booked for a popular electronics which will start from Monday 21st October. In the recent updates of your institute, I saw an Arduino course is starting on the same date, and it will be the most interesting
program
that I
loved
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to book . I mailed you several times asking to arrange a course on
this
, so here it is. So, could you please let me know, whether I can change between the courses since I have been requesting the Arduino
program
for a couple of weeks now? I would appreciate it if you allow me to switch between the courses. It would be highly appreciated if you
can
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address to matter as soon as possible since the course will start in a few days. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun
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Task Achievement
Ensure to mention the specific part-time program name and clearly explain the reason for cancellation.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the use of linking words and transition phrases to establish better coherence and cohesion in the letter.
Lexical Resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used and avoid repetition of phrases and words.
Grammatical Range
Work on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and use of punctuation for better grammatical accuracy.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Part-time course
  • Cancellation
  • Booking
  • Administrator
  • Financial situation
  • Work commitments
  • Health issues
  • Inconvenience
  • Transfer
  • Subject area
  • Schedule
  • Format
  • Cancellation policy
  • Refund process
  • Assistance
  • Understanding
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