Professional sports are a very large industry in the world today. The most elite players can get contracts worth many millions of dollars. Some say there is too much money in sports and that it defeats the purpose of the actual game.
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sports
play a vital role in today's generation. compared with past days, the sports
industry is very large in the world today. the famous players are offered contracts like ads or shoots, they get a lot of money
to do it. and yes it says that there is a lot of money
in sports
. some crowd think that that's the reason why it defeats the purpose of the actual game
. I disagree with the statement and will be talking about it later.
firstly
talking about the people who think that indirectly the game
of the player can be influenced by the money
that is
been offered nowadays to them. the reason behind this
thinking can be, that they might be assuming that if the player is not paid well sometimes that can affect the ability of the sports
person in the game
,however
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,however
this
does not affect the ability of the person to play well for instance
talking about Virat Kohli ( famous Indian cricketer). Virat will not be thinking about the money
he will be paid, instead
, he will more curious about his game
as he is the captain of an Indian cricket team
.
secondly
looking towards the pay which they get is because they have earned that level of respect and that's the reason why they are famous among us. for example
, I have witnessed this
when auctions were held for the IPL team
there were many folk
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folks
team
who were
bought at a higher price Change the verb form
was
for example
Yuvraj Singh was the highest paid due to his record. so this
does not affect or demoralize other team
members.
to summarize some may think that pay can defeat the purpose of the actual game
but that is
not the thing. I would like to suggest society should enjoy sports
and believe in the industrySubmitted by Abhishek on
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