An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Anna, I am writing

this

letter on the behalf of your request for your way of finding a place to stay around my area for a couple of weeks. There are several best places nearby my home to spend your holidays. But I would recommend you to stay

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downtown as the rent is affordable out there

also

there are many recreational places for you to enjoy your leisure time in the evening

such

as parks, a Tennis playground and so on. During your two weeks, you can visit several places which seem very attractive to tourists.

firstly

, Bramalea City Center, a huge shopping mall consisting of several expensive brand stores for clothing and footwear

such

as H&M, Forever, and so on as well as food areas from different parts of the world.

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, there is the museum which does not include

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cost and includes various amazing

artifacts

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to admire. Before Visiting

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would like to give you very significant advice as you are coming

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December which is

very

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coldest month

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would recommend you

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bring

bunch

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some

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warm

cloths

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keep

kepp

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keep

you warm as during that time the

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are very expensive to buy at that time. I am looking forward to

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you! Yours Lovingly, Jessica

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti social behviour and lack of respect for other. what might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can done about this?

Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extend do you agree or disagree?