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*Influence of human beings on world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solution can you suggest? *

#*influence #beings #world #ecosystem #extinction #species #loss #biodiversity
In today’s world, people are becoming one of the major
problem
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 for losing out of
species
. They are more inclined to
expend
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 the area for
fulfilment
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 of their purpose. Despite, giving
an
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another thought
about
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 the concerned surroundings and
species
.
As a result
, they are vanishing slowly. I will be in for sizing on the basic causes which are leading to the problem and how we can solve it. To commence with, mankind is being dominated towards the usage of mobile phones which is becoming one of the major
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for
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 extinction. Because
,
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 the companies are getting more profit from it.
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 they do increase the frequency of concern sim cards which is impacting the survival of birds.
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to
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, humankind is using
the
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fossil fuels excessively.
As a result
, they are becoming invisible.
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,
the
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individuals are in favour of consuming
the
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nonrenewable resources in spite of thinking being devasting in fact. To illustrate, people are likely to transform the forest into urban cities and
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 their factories by cutting down the trees which is having a destructive impact on
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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.
On the other hand
, there should have some strict laws to follow on the utilisation of
such
 places.
Additionally
, there should have some
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 or seminars which can help to create awareness
for
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 the role of
environment
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the environment
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 and its importance.
In addition
,
government
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 should introduce
the
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 subject in the education system which is portraying the significance of our
surrounding
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. To conclude, in my opinion, human beings are influencing the environment and somehow they are becoming the reason for
extinction
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 of
species
. As
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 they are being selfish and not giving
an
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equal authority to other
species
 to live.
Hence
, it can be reduced by keeping in mind that other
species
 have equal power to live their life freely and happily.
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