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You are living in a city in a foreign country and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit your for several days.

#city #country #friend #home #visit
Dear Dian I am glad
heard
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 about your visit to America
next
 week for just relax and travel. I cannot express my happiness
is
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 words.
First
 of all, I can and should say that
,
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 we are going to meet after
1years
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1 year
 and I hope you have been doing great all
this
 time. I am writing to ask you a big favour and do not forget about it. I hope and I need my special things from my home. I would be
blessfully
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blissfully
 happy if you could come and bring them along with you. The
first
 thing is my essential book about being
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successful
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a succesful
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succesful
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successful
 businessman. It was given
me
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 by my best friend. It is absolutely necessary to me for my life.
Secondly
, I want to eat
cake
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 which
it
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was prepared by my mother. Because they are really yummy. I hope it is not difficult and you will cause
about
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your
inconfidience
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confidence
. Do not worry, call me and send your location when you visit
to
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America. I try to pick up you from the airport. I am not waiting much time. Yours sincerely, Rein
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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