Government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets some people think that gov is wasting money and should spend more on addressing the problems of public
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big number of Add an article
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NASA want to discover new life in other plants
like Mars and spent on Correct your spelling
planets
this
research big amount of money. However
, many people
do not like this
idea they think that it is indignantly.
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is growing significantly every year and now the Add an article
the population
nomber
of Correct your spelling
number
people
have
already reached eight billion. So Correct subject-verb agreement
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the government
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concerned
this
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wants
new
planet to give Add an article
a new
people
opportunities to live peacefully. Secondly
, it is a good idea to set up many factories and plants if it happened , our planet would become less polluted. In addition
, in
other Change preposition
on
planets
a lot of natural resources for instance
different types of iron , different expensive stones like diamonds etc. Well it will be great to mine all this
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it
in real life.
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On the other hand
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while approximately 70 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
are poor and 30 percent
can not afford to eat a general meal. Change the spelling
per cent
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of helping for
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apply
people
, we can not even to
defend wild animals from extinction and forests from deforestation. Rather than in our world a lot of places Fix the infinitive
apply
which
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on
the
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planets
. It is better to spend all this
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these
the
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everyone in Correct your spelling
for
this
world. As a result
, only after that
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another planet
other planets
planets
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