An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Sam. I hope you are doing well. I'd be glad to hear from you that you are visiting Sri Lanka

month. I really

exiting

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to see you. Because I didn't see you since I left England. Now I think almost ten years. Time running so fast I like to tell you that once you will arrive

Sri

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in Sri

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Lanka

first

two days you can Stay at our home. Because my home

located

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near to the airport and like to offer you good hospitality service.

Therefore

, you can visit Colombo city and can do shopping with me.

Then

after, I would suggest you tour Down South Sri Lanka for and

first

few days and accommodate over there. I can book for you the cheapest hotel from Down South. While you staying over there, you can tour by boat and watch huge whales on

Southern

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beach and there is many water sport activity

also

available. I hope you can enjoy it very well.

However

, there has Sunny weather so you can bring here some soft clothes to wear.

Otherwise

, you can buy from here.Because

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here garments so cheap. See you soon and all the best for Your Journey. Best wishes

harsha

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

200 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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