"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

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friend, You know that I started working in a new company a few weeks ago . The reason I am writing you

this

letter is I

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inroduce

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you

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my new

job

Firstly

, I am beginning

this

letter with why I changed my

the

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latest

job

. Because my old

job

was very boring and holiday entitlement only in one day .

In addition

, I was not well paid . So I left that

job

Nevertheless

, my new

job

is very amazing . I am a translator at the British embassy. Everything is fine for me here . I earn enough money

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place .

Moreover

, I have a good team . I have

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new information .

That is

, I am going to London for training .

Besides

, I will stay there for two years . After that , I will return to Uzbekistan. At that time, I am going to bring a gift for you . If you learn

English

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language, I will invite you to London.

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sincerely, SARDOR UTKIROV Sardor O'tkirov

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