Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people work for the same company or organisation during their whole working life why I don't see is dead. It is better to work for different companies discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to many young people dropping out from schools , the rate of unemployment is increasing and it effects our society in different ways . In your opinion , how can this situation be improved.