An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#english #friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes

Dear Sarah, I received your letter yesterday and

glad

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am glad

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to know about your visit to Karachi. I have

also

decided to apply for my annual leaves when you arrived in Pakistan. Meanwhile, If you have not arranged any

accomodation

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accommodation

yet

then

I can look for a guest house near to my house for you to stay

during

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in during

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your vacations. I have already planned many activities that we can do together. We can have breakfast at nearby restaurants and can go

for

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apply

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shopping. We can

also

join

club

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the club

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so that we would have some entertainment to do at night. We can take fortnightly membership of Arena Club where we may enjoy bowling, ice skating, video games, meal, etc. You can take long dresses, jeans and

tshirts

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T-shirts

shirts

t-shirts

with you. I can

also

buy you some good traditional clothes.

Weather

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here is moderate so you don't have to keep

sweater

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sweaters

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or winter

dresses

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dress

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in your luggage. I am very happy that I can't wait to see you. Looking to meeting you soon. Warm wishes, Sana Farooq

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thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
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however
although
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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

173 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In Some Countries An Increasing Number Of People Are Suffering From Health Problems As A Result Of Eating Too Much Fast Food.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

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