You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing
complaning
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complaining
regarding the food which was served during my trip. Yesterday, I took
the
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flight 18343, from Brazil to
United
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the United
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States and, as your company has the process to give
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passengers a meal, the crew gave us our dinner. What was not expected is that the taste of the food was not good.
Although
some people have warned about
this
issue, the meal was not changed. I have tried to eat it,
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the food was spoiled and I not only got
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during the flight
,
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but
also
had to be moved to a hospital since the plane arrived. I really hope a compensation from you for my expenses during the treatment in that hospital, which cost
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me $1500,00, and in order to compensate
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time which I lost
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my trip, I believe that would be advisable
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your company
pay
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me
tree
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three
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days of hospitality in a local hotel
as well as
change the date of my ticket flight to return to Brazil. Looking forward
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your response. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale
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