The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.
The illustration provides data related to four different ways of electrical
power
generation in France, over the course of thirty years, starting in 1980 until recently. It's conspicuously obvious that the dominant source of electricity
over the period shown, generating at
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a
nearly
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of nearly
terawatt
per hour, while
the lowest portion of electricity
generated was for renewables. In 1980, thermal power
stations were the main source of electricity
in France, generating around 120 terawatt
hours
of power
. Nuclear and hydroelectric power
stations produced just under 75 terawatt
hours
of electricity
each, and renewables provided a negligible amount. Just one year later, nuclear power
overtook thermal power
as the primary source of electricity
. Between 1980 and 2005, electricity
production from nuclear power
rose dramatically to a peak of 430 terawatt
hours
. By contrast
, the figure for thermal power
fell to only 50 terawatt
hours
in 1985,
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this
level for the rest of the period. Hydroelectric power
generation remained relatively stable, at between 50 and 80 terawatt
hours
, for the whole 32-year period, but renewable electricity
production saw only a small rise to approximately 25 terawatt
hours
by 2012.Submitted by zabdo9739 on
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