We should fix the traffic and transportation by making everyone lives in the cities not suburbs or countrysides. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we are experiencing

traffic

and

transportation

problems

. It is been argued that these issues are able to

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solve

by letting everyone live in the cities rather than the countryside or the rural areas. I disagree with

this

statement, which will be later discussed in the essay. It is true that

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traffic

and

transportation

are now high-priority issues these days but the reason

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this

is not that many

people

live in rural areas or the countryside. The potential cause of

transportation

and

traffic

matters is the increasing number of private car owners and the poor quality of public

transportation

. To illustrate, the poor quality of public

transportation

significantly

discourage

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people

to daily use it.

Instead

, they afford their own vehicles to be able to travel more conveniently and easily, resulting in the increasing number of private

car

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travelling on roads, which causes

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traffic

congestion.

Moreover

, encouraging

people

to live in the cities will aggravate the

problems

. Take Bangkok, my hometown, as an example; More and more

people

have moved

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Bangkok for decades

due to

the civilisation and work opportunities which might not be provided by their hometown, leading the

traffic

and

transportation

problems

in Bangkok to become even worse. The reason is that there is an inadequate public

transportation

service

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all residents,

thus

people

opt to own their own automobiles

instead

,

consequently

, the congestion problem is getting worse. I,

therefore

, totally disagree with the statement.

To conclude

, I disagree with the statement since by only making everyone live in the cities rather than in the suburbs or countryside, the

traffic

and

transportation

matters can not be fixed. The main key to resolving these

problems

is that the government needs to improve and enhance the quality of public

transportation

so that the residents will be encouraged to use it, resulting in which

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traffic

congestion will be ameliorated.