Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

These present days, there

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been many discussions revolving around The issue of whether

music

can play important role in

people

's Communication with each other, especially, when they have different background and

ages

. In my opinion, I Completely assert

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this

opinion for the following reasons. First and Foremost,

music

plays a significant role in improving Individuals' Communication-skills, which is very important in boosting the relationship between

people

from different cultures and Languages;

therefore

, that will help in producing a healthy modern society. In Canada,

for example

, there are different

music

festivals every year including a variety of

music

songs from several languages and bands of all

ages

;

thus

, the

people

Can understand each other in a good way .

Besides

, when we hear new rhythms from different Cultures,we try to understand the meaning of each word;

Consequently

, that will help us to learn new languages and ideas from foreign Countries.

As a result

, we would expand our horizons and outlooks.

Finally

, As a matter of fact, the old generations usually conflict with any issue related to the youngster, but

music

has a positive effect on Contacting

people

of several

ages

together.

on the other hand

, Admittedly, the Individual from multi backgrounds and several

ages

need more ways To understand each other than

music

. In spite of that ,

still

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arts like songs and

music

notes are able to produce a worldlier society. In conclusion, having considered all the above, I believe that

music

is the best method to connect

people

all together around the globe.