The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter ·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party ·explain why you won't be able to attend the party ·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Mrs Doe, Hope you are doing well. I was really happy to see the letter with the invitation to Chris's surprise birthday party next month, and the movement I got the letter I was really glad that you remembered me. I would say that Chris will definitely enjoy the movement since she really loves to have parties and gatherings with her friends.

Moreover

last

year she was unable to celebrate her birthday

due to

that terrible accident that happens to her. Unfortunately, I will not be able to be there for her birthday,

due to

some unavoidable reasons, specifically, my

last

year's exams are going to be held on those days. I really wish I could be there for her and wish her a blessed year ahead. After my exams, I have a holiday for a month and I am planning to visit her since I was unable to see her

while

she was at the hospital for months. So

this

time, I already have scheduled my free time to spend with her in your country. So please expect me there

at the end

of the next month. I will send her a text once I am going to get to the plane. I wish you have a great time. Thank you for inviting me. Yours sincerely, Nimi

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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8 paragraphs

221 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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