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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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It has been suggested that parents should always make sure that their
children
 watch academic programmes in their free
time
 ,in order to make them knowledgeable,
However
, they may get bored. I strongly support the idea of making young people spend their break learning.
This
 essay will analyse the importance of making
children
 spend their spare
time
 on teaching activities and, why it can be pressure on them.  It was assumed that kids who did instructional activities have more knowledge because, they can learn a new language by reading a book with a different language added to the first one , and
consequently
, many
children
 can take another language fluently.
For example
, my sister used to read English books,
therefore
 she has learned English. Add to that, many boys used to watch informative programmes that improve their thinking, and their mindset
as a result
, they became really successful.
For example
, many doctors guarantee that watching tv shows about the human body will make
children
 interested in becoming doctors. In the vast majority of cases,
children
 who spend their free
time
 in that way feel pressure because they are studying in school hardly
therefore
, they need to reset their minds during their relaxation
time
.
Moreover
, some
children
 are getting lower grades than they did in the past because their parents have enforced them to receive extra information from the school. In conclusion. I believe that
children
 will be more successful in the future if they spend their free
time
 doing intellectual activities,
However
, sometimes it can be hard for parents to convince their kids to do those things.
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