You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.

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Sir, I work for VisionBase Solutions as a senior HR which is situated right next to your building. As a team, we are planning to organize a small party, for our staff as a token of appreciation for the successful project they delivered.

However

, as our office space is very small, it is not enough to occupy more than 50 members and we are planning to invite our staff's family members

also

. Luckily, we got to know that you are renting the community centre for events and parties. As we are going to throw up the party on 9th of April which is on Sunday, I would like to book your community centre. Apparently, there will be a small party for three hours and nearly 100 members will be participating in the celebration. Kindly let me know the renting details and rules to be followed if you have any. If you want to meet me directly, I am ready to talk to you in person. Kindly let me know your availability. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Padmapriya

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Topic Vocabulary:

Community center
Office event
Organize
Facilities
Availability
Reserve
Date
Time
Duration
Number of participants
Budget
Catering
Equipment
Setup
Decorations
Entertainment
Parking
Assistance
Collaboration
Appreciate
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You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.

Some people think that the increasing use of computer and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on the young people reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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