The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004

The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004
The line graph illustrates data about citizens of a certain European country who nourished 4 different types of meat between 1979 and 2004 over 2 and half decades
such
as beef, chicken, lamb and fish.
Overall
, we can notice that Beef was the most popular at the beginning, though by the end of the
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period chicken became the most demandable.
Firstly
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beef started at 220 but it plummeted to 180 and
then
it rocketed to 240 and faced a slight dip to 230 in 1984
while
chicken started at 145 and rose considerably to 160
following
this
it decreased gradually to 147.
Next,
the number saw a steady improvement until 1989
then
the number fluctuated.
Secondly
, lamb started at 150 and witnessed a dramatic fall to 120 after which it was unstable and carried on going down.
On the other hand
, first started at 55 and kept decreasing negligibly over the period and it was the least demandable item throughout the period in question. By 1999 it hit a trough and by 2004 it recovered.
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  • consumption
  • meat
  • increase
  • decrease
  • popularity
  • steady
  • stable
  • significant
  • period
  • type
  • contrast
  • decline
  • greatest
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