You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done

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Dear Sir, The purpose of writing

this

letter is to register a complaint regarding my stay at the hotel where you organised the IT conference

last

week. The meeting lasted for three days when we were expected to get involved in team-building activities. One activity required us to play a team sport on the hotel grounds.

However

, the grounds were extremely littered with the remains of a party held there the previous night. Before we could start our activity we wasted our time getting the area cleared and

as a result

lost the competition.

Additionally

, our team experienced unhygienic surroundings and breathing problems during

this

time.

Hence

, I request you to please anticipate the space requirements for meetings in the future and ensure that the appropriate conditions are provided. Hoping to receive a positive response. Yours sincerely, Kamal Singh

Submitted by Leena Kapoor on Sat Apr 08 2023

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8 paragraphs

139 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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