You have a recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your news job tell him her your other news

Hi Maria, I hope everything is going well, is your mum feeling better?

Last

week when we talked, you told me your mother was sick, I live really close to her house so anything she needs just tell her to call me. About ,me I have good news to share with you. As you already know, I have been seeking another job. I was so tired of working so many long shifts, having

such

bad pay and having to design always pretty much the same. It has been so tricky having to work in a place I was not feeling happy anymore. Suddenly I received a call from the brand Billabong, they were looking for a graphic designer for the new office that has just been built in the Coolangatta suburb. Today in the morning I had an interview with the manager and

then

a practice trial and I got the job! The payment they offered me is much more than what I was expecting. I am so happy, the manager told me I was all that they were looking for. They want me to design new bikinis and swimsuits. I start creating some new designers for that, can’t wait to show you! By the way, I was planning to make dinner on Thursday. My brother arrived yesterday. He is planning to stay over two weeks and

then

he is flying back to Spain. Would be amazing if you can come and join us. Hope to you see you soon, All my love, Jim

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A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

254 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have a recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your news job tell him her your other news

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Some people choose to be vegetarians because they believe it improves their health and has a positive effect on the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased bt around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world.