Many employees may work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it benefits only the worker, but not the employers.

Modern technology has created the opportunity for everyone to work from home. It is often argued that working remotely can

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only benefit workers

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employers

.

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far

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concerned, I personally feel that working remotely can be beneficial for

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employers

by reducing the fund

that is

required to set up

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a

company

or

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the employee’s performance

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the online portal.

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, employees gain the opportunity to work in a comfortable environment which is their own housing area, and

this

has been proven that it has the potential to boost up the working performances and

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motivation because

they

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eager to finish their

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and to get rest earlier.

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this

approach,

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will benefit the

employers

at the same time because every task will be submitted on time and

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in a

business

online portal.

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, working remotely can allow both categories to mitigate the burden of expenses which led from

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transportation.

For example

, the petrol

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and gas

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rate has increased drastically but working remotely indeed

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well with the situation of the fluctuation of

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cost.

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, it requires a tremendous amount in order to start a

business

in a physical store. With the help of working remotely,

physical

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a physical

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company

no

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longer required and setting up an online

business

portal is

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way cheaper compared to a physical store.

Furthermore

, it is worth mentioning that every

business

managed to sustain

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the pandemic

due to

the invention of modern technology.

In other words

, the concept of “work from home” is not going to be affected by any occasion in the future and

this

will provide

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better insurance to

company

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the company

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. In conclusion,

according to

the arguments and examples given, I strongly believe that working remotely not

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only

benefit

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benefits

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employees, but

employers

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receive pros as well. In the future, we will certainly see

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take a greater measure to shift their direction from the traditional to online for the well-being of the community.