The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The given diagram highlights the process by which
plastic
bottles are recycled. There are nine steps in the process, from throwing away
plastic
to producing reusable objects.
The first
step
is that recyclable items are thrown in a trash container by consumers and it is the only
step
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that asks
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asks
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ask
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for
citizens
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citizens'
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help.
In addition
, once they are collected by lorries, the rubbish
then
is sorted in a special
center
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centre
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where useable materials are separated from others and
following
this
, they all are compressed into blocks in order to be crushed by using a tool with huge jagged wheels. At
this
point, they are cleaned by way of washing.
The next
step
is producing
plastic
pellets by using a machine and
then
pellets are heated in order to make
in
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them in
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a
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the
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form of raw material and
then
the raw material is packaged in a precise design. The
last
step
is that end products are produced in the form of
plastic
bottles, bags, pencils, T-shirts and so on.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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