You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Annie, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing to thank you and your family especially for allowing me to spend an amazing Christmas holiday at your house. I loved all the awesome dishes prepared by your mother, particularly the roasted chicken with lemon. It was so thoughtful of you to organize the Christmas dinner

together with

the neighbours so that I would be able to make more friends. It was

such

a great time for me during my stay.

However

, I was wondering if you might have seen a black wallet laying around the house. The

last

I remembered seeing it was on the couch in the guest bedroom

while

I was talking on a phone call from my family. I realized I left it when I had to pay the cab driver but fortunately, I had my credit card in my bag and I was able to manage the payment. Will it be possible to send it to me by mail in case you found it? Please send it over to my address Blk 407, #06-651, Jurong West Street 42, 640407. I will transfer you the courier charges online. All the best, Ella

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