The pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides English, in the years 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the portion of
students
at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides
English, in the years 2000 and 2010. Overall
, the data experienced an increasing trend in terms of students
that were able to speak Spanish and another language. Meanwhile, the opposite trend for students
could speak in French and no other language.
In 2000, the proportion of pupils who were able to speak Spanish was the highest than other languages at a third,
and this
portion increased to 35% in
10 years later. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, similar to the Spanish figure, students
seemed to be able to speak both one and two languages, which was going up by 5% in 2010. Unfortunately, the proportion of students
who could speak in
German remained stable (10%) in the given period.
At another glance, it can be noticeable that pupils Change preposition
apply
had
the ability to communicate in French or another language witnessed a Correct pronoun usage
who had
decrease
trend. These portions declined Change the verb form
decreasing
around
half from the initial portion over a decade.Change preposition
by around
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